I love all that detailed hatching throughout the fabric, it reminds me of weaving which makes sense with the fabric. In terms of composition, it might benefit you to play around with cropping so that the object is more off center. Great job overall!
Good Job! I really like the shading even though they are all in grey tone, I can see the difference between each shade of grey. I think you could make the fabric lighter so that it is distinct from the object.
I love this drawing so much! Your brushstrokes make this drawing feel like watercolor! And I can also feel the texture of fabric. Your drawing is beautiful and peaceful! But may be you can make more grey tone spread in the background?
Sisley, in so many ways this is a lovely piece. I really like the way you drew the dark object, and the implied edges at the top of the fabric are so soft and convincing -- it looks like light is pouring over that cloth. I'm not sure what kind of cloth you used here (a napkin?), but it doesn't really look like it's falling over the hard form. It does look volumetric, just not soft. If nothing else, I would definitely go in a soften the lower edges of the fabric so they're more consistent with the rest of the drawing. The composition works, but it could be a lot more dynamic and mysterious!
I love the detailed little hatching inside the fabric! The composition is really good and the shadow of fabric gives a big contrast. I think it would be much better if she could add some dark tones on the background but still I love it.
I really like the mood you created. The contrast of lightness and darkness grab my attention on the object. I think you can make the top of the bottle darker since the fabric is covering up the bottle.
I love all that detailed hatching throughout the fabric, it reminds me of weaving which makes sense with the fabric. In terms of composition, it might benefit you to play around with cropping so that the object is more off center. Great job overall!
ReplyDeleteGood Job! I really like the shading even though they are all in grey tone, I can see the difference between each shade of grey. I think you could make the fabric lighter so that it is distinct from the object.
ReplyDeleteI love this drawing so much! Your brushstrokes make this drawing feel like watercolor! And I can also feel the texture of fabric. Your drawing is beautiful and peaceful! But may be you can make more grey tone spread in the background?
ReplyDeleteSisley, in so many ways this is a lovely piece. I really like the way you drew the dark object, and the implied edges at the top of the fabric are so soft and convincing -- it looks like light is pouring over that cloth. I'm not sure what kind of cloth you used here (a napkin?), but it doesn't really look like it's falling over the hard form. It does look volumetric, just not soft. If nothing else, I would definitely go in a soften the lower edges of the fabric so they're more consistent with the rest of the drawing. The composition works, but it could be a lot more dynamic and mysterious!
ReplyDeleteI love the detailed little hatching inside the fabric! The composition is really good and the shadow of fabric gives a big contrast. I think it would be much better if she could add some dark tones on the background but still I love it.
ReplyDeleteI really like the mood you created. The contrast of lightness and darkness grab my attention on the object. I think you can make the top of the bottle darker since the fabric is covering up the bottle.
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