Miki, this drawing is so much fun to look at. You did a great job making something unique and compelling! There are so many details. The perspective looks good for the most part, but I think the Christmas tree facade still needs a little work; the very top section looks like it's leaning forward still. You can correct this by changing the diagonal edges on the right so that they point upward just a little more. Also, the circular coffee (Starbucks?) sign in the center of the drawing looks a little off. This could just be that the drawing of the coffee cup is not drawn in perspective, but I think it's also the shape of the circle. It should be a little thinner from this angle. Wonderful job on the globe in the front and on the translucent structure in the lower right. Very impressive!
Your city gives me a very modern and vivid vibe that I liked a lot. I could tell that you have observed many shapes and boxes in real life that is really interesting to look at.
I really love your cute city, and the perspective looks so accurate. If you can make all the vertical lines parallel to each other, it would be more accurate.
Miki, this drawing is so much fun to look at. You did a great job making something unique and compelling! There are so many details. The perspective looks good for the most part, but I think the Christmas tree facade still needs a little work; the very top section looks like it's leaning forward still. You can correct this by changing the diagonal edges on the right so that they point upward just a little more. Also, the circular coffee (Starbucks?) sign in the center of the drawing looks a little off. This could just be that the drawing of the coffee cup is not drawn in perspective, but I think it's also the shape of the circle. It should be a little thinner from this angle. Wonderful job on the globe in the front and on the translucent structure in the lower right. Very impressive!
ReplyDeleteWow, what a fun and ambitious piece this is! I love how the viewer can peer inside the buildings on the right and the toy store. Amazing!
ReplyDeleteI like your drawing very much, very detailed and interesting. Especially the clothes window in the upper right corner
ReplyDeleteYour city gives me a very modern and vivid vibe that I liked a lot. I could tell that you have observed many shapes and boxes in real life that is really interesting to look at.
ReplyDeleteThe architecture of your city is very layered. I like the transparency of the buildings you draw, it's a wonderful idea.
ReplyDeleteI think this is a lovely city. It has a silent and calm atmosphere there!
ReplyDeletei love how this looks like a city and its just so interesting
ReplyDeleteThis drawing is neat and cute. The city looks like a scene from an animated movie and I think it is really good. nice drawing!!
ReplyDeleteI really love your cute city, and the perspective looks so accurate. If you can make all the vertical lines parallel to each other, it would be more accurate.
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