Miki, this is a really dramatic and beautiful drawing! I love the darkness of it, and the pointed element is both funny and disturbing -- very mysterious indeed. While the folds look very convincing overall, there looks to be a strange dark line on the left that you may want to soften. Also, on the right side of the piece, there's a triangular highlight that looks like it should be softened a bit around the edges. Right now it looks kind of flat. Beautiful transitions in the middle of the piece -- really nice job!
I love that this drawing is focused more on the shadows rather than the highlights. You made a great choice with the object and the execution of the draped cloth. Awesome job :^)
i like how dark this drawing is its very drastic. maybe adding brighter highlights would add a little more of this drastic vibe to it. great work you worked so hard on this
I love how she used the charcoal to blend it so softly. The contrast between the background and drapery is clear and convincing. Also, gives the mysterious feeling to me and wonder what is behind the fabric.
Miki, this is a really dramatic and beautiful drawing! I love the darkness of it, and the pointed element is both funny and disturbing -- very mysterious indeed. While the folds look very convincing overall, there looks to be a strange dark line on the left that you may want to soften. Also, on the right side of the piece, there's a triangular highlight that looks like it should be softened a bit around the edges. Right now it looks kind of flat. Beautiful transitions in the middle of the piece -- really nice job!
ReplyDeleteI love that this drawing is focused more on the shadows rather than the highlights. You made a great choice with the object and the execution of the draped cloth. Awesome job :^)
ReplyDeletei like how dark this drawing is its very drastic. maybe adding brighter highlights would add a little more of this drastic vibe to it. great work you worked so hard on this
ReplyDeleteI love how she used the charcoal to blend it so softly. The contrast between the background and drapery is clear and convincing. Also, gives the mysterious feeling to me and wonder what is behind the fabric.
ReplyDeleteI like the drape and light and shadow of your cloth. It looks very soft.
ReplyDeleteI like the drape and light and shadow of your cloth. It looks very soft.
ReplyDeleteI like the drape and light and shadow of your cloth. It looks very soft.
ReplyDeleteI really like your lights and shadows, which it really creates a great three-dimensional illusion.
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