Sisley, I really like the way this came out. The whole thing has such a playful feel, even if that wasn't necessarily a quality of the music. The gradients in the background are superbly done -- such smooth transitions. I agree with the comments invoking Kandinsky -- this certainly does look like something he would do! One thing that bothers me is the grey shape at the bottom on the left. While I like the shape itself and its placement, the color is so similar to the background that it kind of gets lost, making that bottom area look sort of off kilter. Perhaps that would look better as a brighter color. And I do agree that there should be something in that negative space at the bottom -- just one more shape, perhaps. Terrific job overall!
Sisley, I really like the way this came out. The whole thing has such a playful feel, even if that wasn't necessarily a quality of the music. The gradients in the background are superbly done -- such smooth transitions. I agree with the comments invoking Kandinsky -- this certainly does look like something he would do! One thing that bothers me is the grey shape at the bottom on the left. While I like the shape itself and its placement, the color is so similar to the background that it kind of gets lost, making that bottom area look sort of off kilter. Perhaps that would look better as a brighter color. And I do agree that there should be something in that negative space at the bottom -- just one more shape, perhaps. Terrific job overall!
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