Sisley, these look very good in terms of the different views and how you've incorporated the objects into the space around them, but I think the whole thing looks too dark. See if you can introduce some more light shapes by making a fifth (simpler) drawing. Another option is to lighten them up in Photoshop before printing them for the collage. Whatever you do, just be sure you have a wide range of values to work with.
These are really interesting, Sisley! I love how you maintain your painterly style while translating it to cubism. I think you could pop some more highlights in, as you have successfully done in the top left image.
I love the dramatic darkness of your drawings! But I think you can add more light to show the light source like what you did in the first drawing. I also like the sense of volume of your objects. Great works!
this this so interesting. I think I can clearly see what the objects are. three out of 4 of these images look very smooth with a dash of light in places and it just so interesting. i slightly wish there were more very of grays in this picture
Sisley, these look very good in terms of the different views and how you've incorporated the objects into the space around them, but I think the whole thing looks too dark. See if you can introduce some more light shapes by making a fifth (simpler) drawing. Another option is to lighten them up in Photoshop before printing them for the collage. Whatever you do, just be sure you have a wide range of values to work with.
ReplyDeleteThese are really interesting, Sisley! I love how you maintain your painterly style while translating it to cubism. I think you could pop some more highlights in, as you have successfully done in the top left image.
ReplyDeleteYour works are terrific! But I think you need some lighter values since the whole images look too dark to me.
ReplyDeleteI like your homework. They look very mysterious, I think you can brighten up the highlights of objects
ReplyDeleteI love the dramatic darkness of your drawings! But I think you can add more light to show the light source like what you did in the first drawing. I also like the sense of volume of your objects. Great works!
ReplyDeletethis this so interesting. I think I can clearly see what the objects are. three out of 4 of these images look very smooth with a dash of light in places and it just so interesting. i slightly wish there were more very of grays in this picture
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