Ally, you've certainly created something that looks like a shattered and reconfigured mirror! The individual shards are put together in a really dynamic way (good distribution of lights and darks, good combination of small and larger shapes). And I like what you've done with the space around the central cluster. All that said, the composition feels slightly off. I keep wanting to go in there and push the cluster to the right a little. I guess it's because it goes off the edge on the left but just touches it on the right. I wonder if this could be corrected if you added some more shapes on the right? Also, maybe you could add a few more shapes that show fragments of your reflected face? I think those would be fun for the viewer to spot. Really nice job overall.
Ally, this is phenomenal! I love the contrast between light and dark, as well as the shading. It really gives off the broken glass effect. I agree with Taney and think that you could add some more shapes on the right, because it seems that most of the shapes lean to the left. Overall, great job!
ally this looks like shattered glass and i'm in love with it. this is so much fun and i honestly wish i did something like this instead of what i did. this is just great and it looks so clean
Ally, you've certainly created something that looks like a shattered and reconfigured mirror! The individual shards are put together in a really dynamic way (good distribution of lights and darks, good combination of small and larger shapes). And I like what you've done with the space around the central cluster. All that said, the composition feels slightly off. I keep wanting to go in there and push the cluster to the right a little. I guess it's because it goes off the edge on the left but just touches it on the right. I wonder if this could be corrected if you added some more shapes on the right? Also, maybe you could add a few more shapes that show fragments of your reflected face? I think those would be fun for the viewer to spot. Really nice job overall.
ReplyDeleteAlly, this is phenomenal! I love the contrast between light and dark, as well as the shading. It really gives off the broken glass effect. I agree with Taney and think that you could add some more shapes on the right, because it seems that most of the shapes lean to the left. Overall, great job!
ReplyDeleteI like your painting very much, it looks like a broken rose! I can't describe it! It's beautiful!!
ReplyDeleteally this looks like shattered glass and i'm in love with it. this is so much fun and i honestly wish i did something like this instead of what i did. this is just great and it looks so clean
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