Sisley, this piece is so striking and unique. I love the balance of warm and cool tones and the collaged elements. I agree with what was said in critique about integrating the right side of the face into the background more, especially that dark, carved-out area in line with the top of the "nose."
Sisley, I'm not sure I can add any more than what I said in class. I think this is a terrific drawing. I would definitely take care of what Ally is referring to above, and I would also lengthen the little face in the center so that it looks more like a nose. This will also strengthen the composition.
Sisley, this piece is so striking and unique. I love the balance of warm and cool tones and the collaged elements. I agree with what was said in critique about integrating the right side of the face into the background more, especially that dark, carved-out area in line with the top of the "nose."
ReplyDeleteSisley, I'm not sure I can add any more than what I said in class. I think this is a terrific drawing. I would definitely take care of what Ally is referring to above, and I would also lengthen the little face in the center so that it looks more like a nose. This will also strengthen the composition.
ReplyDeletethis just so cool. this gives me big horror movie vibes and the style with it just impresses me so much. this is a very strong piece
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