Michelle, I really like the soft quality of this drawing, and the anatomy looks for the most part very good. On the third hand from the left, the hand looks a bit too wide. Also, on the first hand, the thumb looks a bit flat. I think putting some knuckles in there would help. As far as the composition goes, I like the way the hands are relating to each other, but I don't think the negative space is as active as it could be. Maybe if you extended the arms so they go off the edge at the bottom this would help. It also bothers me how little space there is after the third hand. Try using large general shapes first next time when you're laying out your composition!
I love the soft, foggy quality of this work, Michelle. Especially the hand on the right, I love how the fingers are subtle and well blended. I think you could play around with adding a background or texture behind the hands as well, to cement them in space. Great job!
Michelle, I really like the soft quality of this drawing, and the anatomy looks for the most part very good. On the third hand from the left, the hand looks a bit too wide. Also, on the first hand, the thumb looks a bit flat. I think putting some knuckles in there would help. As far as the composition goes, I like the way the hands are relating to each other, but I don't think the negative space is as active as it could be. Maybe if you extended the arms so they go off the edge at the bottom this would help. It also bothers me how little space there is after the third hand. Try using large general shapes first next time when you're laying out your composition!
ReplyDeleteI love the soft, foggy quality of this work, Michelle. Especially the hand on the right, I love how the fingers are subtle and well blended. I think you could play around with adding a background or texture behind the hands as well, to cement them in space. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThe outline of your nails seem too sharp in this soft quality drawing.
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