Miki, there is some very good anatomy work here! The only problem I see is with the thumb on the bottom hand. It looks a bit flat -- and also a bit long. It seems like the tip of the thumb should be bending slightly. Also, on that same hand, the curve in the top of the hand looks a bit awkward. Maybe that needs revisiting. I really like your idea for this piece, and the way the hands are relating to each other is powerful and evocative. One thing that bothers me is how it gets lighter on the bottom. I know that was intentional, but something tells me it would be a stronger drawing if the dark marks were taken all the way off the lower edge. Nice job -- I can tell you put a lot of work into this!
Miki, there is some very good anatomy work here! The only problem I see is with the thumb on the bottom hand. It looks a bit flat -- and also a bit long. It seems like the tip of the thumb should be bending slightly. Also, on that same hand, the curve in the top of the hand looks a bit awkward. Maybe that needs revisiting. I really like your idea for this piece, and the way the hands are relating to each other is powerful and evocative. One thing that bothers me is how it gets lighter on the bottom. I know that was intentional, but something tells me it would be a stronger drawing if the dark marks were taken all the way off the lower edge. Nice job -- I can tell you put a lot of work into this!
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